Arista made it three steps up the base of the final hill before Bram's voice stopped her.
"...You're climbing that in this?" He gestured at her still-equipped cloud suit, the same springy, marshmallow-round bulk that had cushioned all four of them through the crash landing.
Arista looked down at herself, genuinely startled by the observation. "...Oh. Right." She pulled up her panel, already grimacing at her own oversight. "Unequip."
The suit dissolved away in a soft shimmer, her actual clothes settling back into place beneath it, considerably more practical for an uphill climb than several kilograms of cushioned cloud material.
"In my defense," she said, already starting up the slope properly this time, "surviving a plane crash and then immediately climbing a hill in full protective gear felt, at the time, like a reasonable continuation of the same emergency."
Claire and Colm followed suit, both looking faintly relieved to be free of the bulk, and the four of them climbed the final hill together, the city unfolding slowly beneath them with each step, gears the size of houses turning in patient rhythm, steam venting in soft, measured plumes, entire districts rotating on schedules too vast and deliberate to be anything but deeply, meticulously intentional.
Nobody spoke.
They walked toward the gate in silence, the mechanical rhythm of the place growing louder, closer, until a single figure came into view, standing motionless at the entrance.
Not armed. Not postured for hostility. Simply standing, waiting, with the same patient stillness as the vast gears turning behind it.
The golem was tall, humanoid in rough shape, its body a visible lattice of interlocking components, polished brass plating along one shoulder, weathered and pitted iron along a forearm, a small radar-like dish rotating slowly atop its head, tracking their approach with quiet, mechanical precision. Every piece of it looked subtly different in age and wear, patched and replaced across what was clearly a very long span of time, nothing matching, everything functional.
It looked at Arista, then at the rest of them in turn, its radar dish rotating slowly, tracking each of them with quiet, mechanical precision.
"Your transportation method," it said, voice flat, precise, entirely without inflection, "was inefficient."
Arista blinked. "...Excuse me?"
"Long-range sensors recorded your vessel's descent. Estimated energy expenditure exceeded optimal parameters by 17.4 percent."
Bram leaned toward her, whispering. "...He hasn't even said hello yet."
The golem paused. Processing, apparently, though whether the pause was genuine calculation or simply protocol was impossible to tell.
"Correction," it said finally.
"Hello."
The city that revealed itself over the following hours operated on principles entirely unlike anything Arista had encountered across a year and a half of tunnels, trains, and negotiated compromises with living, breathing cultures. There was no war here, the golem explained, in the same flat, matter-of-fact tone it used for everything, not because peace had ever been declared, but because conflict was, by every measurable standard, wildly inefficient. No crime, for the same reason; theft and violence produced negative net value regardless of who benefited, and the entire population operated on a shared, unwavering commitment to positive-sum outcomes. No poverty, because resources were allocated according to actual need rather than accumulated according to opportunity. No waste, ever, of anything, material, time, or effort.
"We do not build," the golem said, when Arista finally asked how their city had come to exist, "unless rational necessity demands it."
"...Meaning?"
"Meaning this structure—" it gestured at a nearby gear-tower, turning in slow, unbroken rhythm "—has functioned without failure for six hundred and twelve years. There is no rational basis for replacing or redesigning a system that continues to perform its function optimally. To do so would consume resources for no corresponding gain."
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Arista sat with that for a long moment, feeling the specific, fundamental strangeness of it settle in, a philosophy that stood in near-total opposition to everything that had ever driven her, from the tutorial forge onward.
She built things because they were interesting. Because a problem caught her attention and refused to let go, because curiosity alone had been enough justification for a pickaxe, a gravity bike, an entire continental railway, a weapon she'd hoped never to need. Necessity had rarely been the actual driver, it had usually arrived afterward, as a convenient excuse for something she already wanted to build regardless.
The golems built only when necessity demanded it, and not one moment sooner.
"...So if something's worked perfectly for six hundred years," she said slowly, working through the implications, "you'd never touch it. Never improve it. Never even wonder if there's a better way, unless the current way actually stops functioning."
"Correct," the golem said, without a trace of hesitation. "Improvement absent malfunction represents unjustified resource expenditure."
Arista glanced sideways at Bram, then at Claire, then at Colm, all three of them equally, visibly struck by the sheer, alien logic of it.
"...That's the exact opposite of literally everything I've ever done," she said, half to herself, something between fascination and genuine unease settling into her chest. "I don't wait for something to break. I look at something that already works fine and think 'yeah, but what if it worked better.'"
The golem's radar dish rotated slightly, tracking her with what might, in a being capable of expression, have been curiosity.
"That," it said, "is inefficient."
"Yeah," Arista admitted, grinning despite herself, the old, familiar restless itch already stirring beneath the strangeness of it all. "Probably. But it's also basically my entire personality, so I don't think I'm changing that anytime soon."
Arista, apparently having entirely lost track of any concept of personal space the moment actual, functioning machinery entered her field of view, stepped in close, tracing a finger along a seam where brass plating met a considerably older, pitted section of iron.
"...This joint's been replaced," she murmured, half to herself, entirely absorbed. "Recent, relatively: the wear pattern's different from the surrounding plating." She moved her hand further along the golem's forearm, studying a small, precisely fitted gear visible through a gap in the housing. "And this is original. Same age as whatever core you started with, probably."
The golem stood perfectly still throughout the entire examination, radar dish rotating gently to track her movement but otherwise offering no resistance whatsoever.
Bram, watching from a short distance, winced. "...Strawberry, personal space."
"He's not stopping me."
"That doesn't mean you should—"
"I am not stopping her," the golem confirmed, entirely unbothered, "because the energy expenditure required to prevent this examination exceeds the energy expenditure of simply permitting it. Your proximity presents no measurable threat."
Bram opened his mouth, found no adequate response to that particular logic, and closed it again.
Arista, meanwhile, had crouched slightly, studying a cluster of small, interlocking gears near the golem's hip joint with open, delighted fascination.
"...Could I take you apart?" she asked, entirely serious, already mentally cataloguing which tools she'd need. "I promise I'd put you back together properly. I've reassembled more complicated things than this."
The golem's dish paused mid-rotation.
"Why?"
"I want to see what makes you tick."
A brief pause, processing, evaluating, the same flat consideration it gave everything.
"My core does that," it said finally. "Disassembly is not required."
Arista blinked, momentarily thrown by the answer's literal precision. "...That's not what I meant."
"Clarify your intent, then."
"I mean I want to understand how you work. The mechanism. The actual engineering behind how a body built from six hundred years of replaced parts still functions as a coherent, thinking whole." She gestured at the visible seams, the mismatched ages of components, the sheer, patient complexity of it. "I've built steam engines, gear ratios, pressure systems. I understand mechanics intimately. But nothing I've ever built has been alive the way you clearly are. I want to know what bridges that gap."
The golem considered this for a longer pause than its previous responses had required.
"That is curiosity," it said finally, "not necessity."
"...Yeah. Pretty much always has been, for me."
"Curiosity alone does not justify disassembly of a functioning unit," the golem said, though something in its tone, if tone was even the right word for something so consistently flat, seemed almost, faintly, amused by the distinction it was drawing. "However. I am willing to provide schematic documentation, if such exists in a format compatible with your understanding. This satisfies your stated goal without requiring physical disassembly, and therefore represents the more efficient solution."
Arista straightened, grinning despite the alien strangeness of the entire exchange. "...You'd rather show me blueprints than let me actually open you up."
"Correct. Documentation review carries negligible risk. Physical disassembly carries nonzero risk of reassembly error, however unlikely you claim such error to be." A brief pause. "I am also under no obligation to trust an unfamiliar entity's self-assessed competence."
"...That's fair, actually." Arista laughed, stepping back finally, some genuine respect settling into her expression alongside the fascination. "Efficient and reasonably cautious. I like you."
"Your approval is noted," the golem said, entirely deadpan, "though it does not factor into my operational parameters."
Bram, watching the entire exchange, muttered quietly to Claire. "...I think that might be the single most polite way anyone's ever told her to back off."
"She's going to be insufferable about the schematics either way," Claire murmured back.
"Oh, absolutely."
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