Dungeon Master (Karma System)

Kincaid’s room disappeared before he could put down his glass.

One moment, he stood beside the chair from which he had watched Max reopen the dungeon. The next, his feet rested on a black floor reflecting stars that did not exist above it.

The Elder God’s assembly hall had no walls.

Terraces curved around an empty center beneath a sky containing too many constellations. Each seat had been made for one apprentice, although made was not quite the correct word. Some resembled thrones. Others were cushions, pools of fire, patches of living forest, carved stones, or spaces where the light bent around something that did not want to be seen.

The last time Kincaid stood there, nearly a thousand places had been occupied.

Fewer than four hundred held anyone now.

The pattern of the empty places made the loss feel less abstract. The apprentice who once argued that a fortress needed no inhabitants was gone. So was the goddess who had spent the first meeting boasting that her champion already ruled three dungeons. Kincaid had not liked either of them, but dislike did not tell him what had happened when their seats went dark. A patron could watch one trial and still know nothing about the hundreds ending beside it.

He found his place by the small golden mark hovering above it. No names identified the empty seats. The absence did not explain whether a champion had died, lost a core, surrendered, or simply failed whatever test the Elder God had chosen for them.

Kincaid sat. He prepared himself to wait and hoped he wouldn’t be required to wait long.

Conversations moved through the terraces without crossing the center. An apprentice with six silver wings demanded to know why her champion had been tested at sea when another had been allowed to defend a mountain. A god whose body contained a miniature storm argued that his champion should have been given warning before a plague appeared inside his dungeon.

Nobody had enough information to compare anything.

The restrictions had permitted each apprentice to watch only one champion. Now that those restrictions were lifted, they could speak to one another, but the memories they brought to the hall still described hundreds of different competitions.

"Mine had to survive being buried." Someone said two terraces below Kincaid.

"By an enemy?"

"By a volcano."

"That seems excessive."

"Your champion was a mountain."

"That did not make it pleasant."

Kincaid listened without joining them.

He had watched a crowd become an army. He had watched it learn Max’s dungeon one death at a time, cross four levels, break Kildra’s fortress, fight through the Dead Lands, and spend its final day searching a country for a hidden core.

He did not know whether that sounded better or worse than a volcano.

The final surviving apprentice appeared.

Every conversation ended.

The Elder God did not enter the hall. The center simply stopped being empty.

He wore the same unremarkable shape Kincaid remembered from the beginning of the competition. Two arms. Two legs. Plain dark clothing. A face each apprentice perceived differently and none could describe after looking away.

The power surrounding him did not need decoration.

"The Establishment Period and First Champion Challenge are complete." The Elder God said. "The champions represented in this hall remain in the competition. Patron communication restrictions have been lifted."

An apprentice on the lowest terrace stood. "Were the challenges the same?"

"No."

The answer produced a wave of voices that died before becoming an interruption.

"Then how are the results comparable?" The apprentice asked.

"They are not scores in the same game." The Elder God said. "Each challenge was constructed after observing what the champion established. Each was intended to place pressure on weaknesses, assumptions, and systems that had not yet been tested. The requirement was not equality of obstacle. It was preservation of the dungeon under a meaningful threat."

The silver-winged apprentice rose next. "Some champions received an enemy tailored against them."

"All did."

"My champion’s dungeon was built on islands. The challenge removed the water."

"Then your champion built a dungeon whose survival depended on a condition an enemy could change."

The six wings pulled close to his body.

"The champions adapted," The Elder God continued. "That is why you are still here."

He sat.

Kincaid thought of his champion’s normal instances being disabled. Max had designed adventures for separate parties. The challenge placed thousands of hostile people into the actual dungeon and allowed them to build a military road through it.

The Elder God had not tested whether Fey Nights could defeat one more group of five. He had tested what happened when Max’s assumptions stopped protecting him.

Another apprentice asked the question Kincaid wanted answered.

"What happened to those who failed?"

"They were eliminated from the competition."

"That was not the question." Said a brave apprentice who wanted an answer.

The Elder God looked toward the speaker.

"Some champions died. Some lost their bindings. Some survived the loss of their dungeons and were returned to the circumstances from which they were chosen. A small number declined to continue when their challenge gave them that choice. You may review the result of your own champion. You may not interfere with an eliminated champion merely because you dislike the outcome."

The answer left hundreds of empty seats no easier to look at.

The miniature storm stood. Lightning moved beneath his skin. "What are we allowed to do now?"

A new record opened before every apprentice.

[Patron Stage: Advisory.]

[Permitted: Communication, information, instruction, and champion-approved assistance within declared limits.]

[Prohibited: Compulsion, concealed alteration, direct control of champion forces, interference with another champion, and participation in an active challenge unless expressly authorized.]

[All patron contributions will be recorded.]

Several apprentices began reading the detailed rules. Kincaid went directly to the section on consent.

A patron could propose improvements. A champion had to accept them. Any transfer of divine power would be measured and placed in a contribution ledger. Gifts that exceeded the limit established for the current stage would be blocked rather than allowed so as to not disqualify a champion without warning.

Advice carried no measured cost.

Information could carry one if the patron obtained it through divine methods unavailable to the champion.

Patrons could not enter their champions’ dungeons unless invited, and an invitation did not grant authority beyond its stated terms.

Kincaid suspected Max would approve of that sentence.

"May we command our champions to prepare for the next challenge?" An apprentice asked.

"You may recommend preparation." The Elder God said. "A champion who exists only as an extension of a patron is not a champion. If you require obedience, you selected the wrong person."

"When does the next challenge begin?"

"Not today."

The hall waited for more.

None came.

"Will they receive another Establishment Period?" The apprentice asked.

"No. They will receive time. How they use it will be observed. A countdown will appear when one becomes relevant."

That answer would not satisfy Max.

It was still better than an immediate clock.

An apprentice three places from Kincaid turned toward him. Her face changed age whenever she moved, although her expression remained irritated through every version.

"Master, one champion was selected from beyond Prime."

Kincaid kept his expression neutral. Mostly.

"That should not have been permitted." She continued. "The cores were intended for the Prime Universe."

The Elder God’s attention shifted to Kincaid.

Every apprentice in the hall followed it.

"The core was placed in Prime." The Elder God said. "The rule governed the destination. It did not restrict the origin of the soul attached to it."

"Then he used an omission."

"He read the instruction as given."

Kincaid inclined his head toward his master. He managed to not give the apprentice beside him a smug look.

He felt that his restraint deserved recognition.

"Was the champion’s foreign system permitted as well?" She asked.

"The champion possessed it before selection."

"Kincaid altered it."

This time, Kincaid stood before the Elder God could answer.

"I did." He said. "The alteration used the champion’s own authority. A recorded debt remains for the portion consumed during the process."

"A patron cannot now grant unmeasured power by naming it repayment." The other apprentice said.

"I am aware."

"Are you?"

"Enough." The Elder God said.

The single word removed every lesser sound from the hall.

His attention remained on Kincaid.

"The vow was recorded before deployment." The Elder God said. "Repayment equal to the authority taken will not count as patron assistance. The transfer will be audited. Any excess will enter the patron contribution ledger. Any concealed condition will void the settlement and be treated as an unauthorized alteration."

Kincaid had expected restrictions.

He had not expected his master to state them so publicly.

"Understood." He said.

"Does the champion know of the debt?"

"He does."

"Did he select the form of repayment?"

"Not yet."

"Then you have not repaid it."

Kincaid felt several apprentices enjoy the observation.

"No, Master."

"Settle it according to the champion’s choice. Do not confuse your preference with his benefit."

Kincaid sat.

Questions continued.

The apprentices asked what the competition was selecting. The Elder God told them they would learn what they needed when they needed it. They asked whether champions would fight one another. He said future challenges could involve other champions but did not promise they would. They asked whether the dungeons were expected to expand, specialize, form alliances, or remain hidden.

"They are expected to choose." The Elder God answered with yet another non-answer.

That was the closest he came to explaining the purpose.

No mention was made of how more trials would come. No destination waited on the new patron rules. Nothing explained why the Elder God was testing dungeon cores.

The mystery bothered Kincaid more now that Max had passed.

Before the challenge, winning had been enough of a goal.

Now the competition contained a country that should not exist, millions of people living inside a dungeon, and a human who had turned every level into something larger than its original purpose. Whatever the Elder God intended to do with the survivors would not be small.

The assembly ended without ceremony.

The center became empty. Apprentices vanished from the terraces one after another. Some left immediately to contact their champions. Others remained in groups, exchanging the portions of their trials the rules allowed them to discuss.

Kincaid returned to his room.

His untouched glass rested beside the chair. Only a few seconds appeared to have passed there.

The Sanctuary observation invitation had expired during the meeting. The golden window showed no view of Max’s dungeon.

Kincaid opened the repayment record instead.

The options he had prepared filled page after page. Physical boons. Mental protections. Core improvements. Dungeon functions. Divine artifacts. Bounded authorities. Max could choose one form, divide the value among several, or reject every prepared option and require Kincaid to construct another that satisfied the same audit.

Kincaid had once imagined choosing the most impressive gift and presenting it with enough flair that Max would understand what had been done for him.

That version of the conversation no longer survived contact with Max.

He sent a communication request.

[Meeting complete. Requesting scheduled communication to report the Elder God’s instructions and discuss repayment.]

The reply arrived a minute later.

[Proposed time: One hour.]

Kincaid accepted.

Then he began reading the record from the first page again.

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